Sunday, March 11, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

You are not what you seem to be, Tesji, not at all.  You are caught in a web of stars, fire, and water, and the wind serenades you like a lost lover.

This is probably my favorite sentence from my rewrite of The Crystal Lattice last night.  I didn't get very far because I was finding it hard to focus.  The internet is distracting.  It doesn't really matter because I need to take this rewrite slowly and try to catch all of the problems.

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